واااااااااااااااااااااااااااااايد حلوووو ..
مشكوووورة حب الامارااات .. 
nice one my dear
but i want to tell you the poem is write in this way ^_^ not peom
i hope to see more from you
in English Club
^^ wo0ow its pretty kool keep on
this is a very sad prose
it isnot poem
it is prose
نثر
محاولة جميله جدا
لكن أختي اذا تقدرين تستخدمين microsoft word لتصحيح بعض الأخطاء الاملائيه
والسموحه
… But Yeah,
Sometimes walking in the rain does give this feeling
Thanks For Sharing ^.^
&
Good Start…
Thanks for sharing & well done it is just begining & Inshallah you will gain more knowledge and write better onse
Only some grammer & spealling mistakes so do not worry I was on that stage 1 day but thankks to Allah that I am not perfect but better
Thanks & would like to read more
Keep it up
1 more thing this is not poeam